I Love You ( I Promise)
blue and bright
dark and rational
we balance each other out
trapped in our situation
we make the most of us
to the point where neither wants to leave
(would we really want to?)
"i didn't know you were so close to me"
And you know i wish i were
closer
is two months too early?
were we predestined?
or did we choose?
i bet we'll never know
so let's not care
and live in the moment
"college" will come soon enough
but will you look?
see me first
with my eating habits
do you see me here?
your screwed up face
"oh! there you are"
i told you i wouldn't go far
do you realize?
i'd be there in a second
to feel you
see you
hear you
you make the senses tingle
and yet i'd drop my name
for you
would you pick me up?
lend me yours?
i want more than that
it may be a weird conversation
are you ready for this?
no doubts
no fears
commitment
support
i don't want a balance
i want to tilt this scale so bad
nothing can raise us from our grounding
i want to be stuck with you
(tilted)
and don't fight me
because i know you want to too
i could lay here forever
drowning in my own lack of production
if it meant never being out of reach
of your nervous hands
lets get something straight
i want to belong to you
but you don't own me
and vice versa
so you have your bottle rocket war
and i'll get my shadow
i'll be neurotic
and you'll like it
because baby
our best features balance us out

15 Comments:
opposites attract add up in...
I'm speechless and you know how I love that. haha.You make me feel so much better than I deserve. I am Okay. (I Promise)
Ok...so my comment isn't going to be so sentimental. I knew you were writing during Bible study. tisk tisk. Did you listen at all? Do you know that you are who God says you are? I'm just kidding. I love your writing, and I would like to take credit for the word scale, and maybe even a little for the nuerotic part. Haha. Love ya!!
I wouldn't have ever known the word scale, had I not drawn the little picture I did. Who knew we could be so good a pictionary. And for all of you out there who doubt me, you never know when your inspiration will hit, or when the time will come when you can let it loose. But thank the Lord I'm a girl and can multi-task, cause I was a listening to Mrs. Moore. I AM WHO GOD SAYS I AM! I've got that third finger up...where's yours?
Backatch Thee.
Oh I'll give you a third finger alright.
Hahahahahahahahhahahahahaha. Touche!
Yeah I thought you'd enjoy that. I meant it in the nicest, most loving way possible.
I can't believe this. It finally emailed me my notice about the comments. Only it only emailed one, and it was my own, the touche one. And I mean you're a hussy in the nicest, most loving way possible.
Thanks sweetheart! And of course you know that when I call you a stupid, ugly, bizatchy hoe I mean it in the nicest, most loving way possible too!
omg, Den-ace the menace is going to drive me insane. Ahhhhhhhhh! I'm not a stupid, ugly bizatchy hoe. I'm not a stupid, ugly, bizatchy ho either since that's how you spell it. But hey even if I am, I learn from the best sweetness. MWAH!
P.S. Somethings wrong with my blogger account and I don't remember my account name or password....so I'm waiting for the blogger thing to send me an email.
Yeah I spelled it with an e on purpose so that if you got mad, I could always refer back to the point that I only called you a garden tool!! Thanks for once again giving credit where credit is due. But I have to admit that you've given a lot of good pointers of your own, sweetheart.
Well then I guess there's only one thing left to say....
Ami tomAy bhAlobAshi !!!! MWAH!
Haha, have fun with that one.
Ugh, and all the sudden I'm logged in again??? Oh wait, i think I just figured it out...haha oops. And I'm not telling because I feel stupid...
Ok, I had fun with it, then I couldn't figure it out, and then it wasn't fun anymore. so i'm finished with it, and i'm ready for you to tell me what it means.
How about no? Cheeky.
Fine. I'm not your friend anymore, and you're not coming to my birthday party! So there. Snazzy.
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